Oblivion

Class Name: Joir Sambru
Type: Combat
Family: Sambru
Founder: Tumen Sambru
Class Nature: Defense, quick strike, and patience.
Main Skills: Blade, Athletics, Block, Heavy Armor, Acrobatics, Marksmen, and Armorer
Side skills: Blacksmith
History of Class: Tumen used this style to fight any many arenas and win. He was once asked to slay a demon by the king that was tormenting the land. Tumen used his style of combat to let the demon use up all its magic before he went in for the kill. He taught his style to his son and told him that this style is used best to let the enemy use their endurance then finish them. His son past on the style to his son and so on. This style has been used to kill hundreds of Men, fifty Demons, and thousands of creatures. 104

Interesting, and Approved

Denied... fix these problems...

-Class Nature... fix it...
-Side skills- WTF is Chief
-Is the class name that on purpose cause that looks like a character name...
- and how long is the Backstory on it? Add a wordcount...

Sorry, I lied. I'm new to this. Please find it in your grace to forgive me oh rejected one...

post after your done editing...

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