Oblivion

Kom'rk · Joined: 06 Apr 2009 Posts: 2

Class Name: Joir Sambru
Type: Combat
Family: Sambru
Founder: Tumen Sambru
Class Nature: Defense, quick strike, and patience.
Main Skills: Blade, Athletics, Block, Heavy Armor, Acrobatics, Marksmen, and Armorer
Side skills: Blacksmith
History of Class: Tumen used this style to fight any many arenas and win. He was once asked to slay a demon by the king that was tormenting the land. Tumen used his style of combat to let the demon use up all its magic before he went in for the kill. He taught his style to his son and told him that this style is used best to let the enemy use their endurance then finish them. His son past on the style to his son and so on. This style has been used to kill hundreds of Men, fifty Demons, and thousands of creatures. 104

Danton · Posted: Wed Apr 08, 2009 12:25 am Post subject:

Interesting, and Approved
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Allucard · Posted: Wed Apr 08, 2009 12:26 am Post subject:

Denied... fix these problems...

-Class Nature... fix it...
-Side skills- WTF is Chief
-Is the class name that on purpose cause that looks like a character name...
- and how long is the Backstory on it? Add a wordcount...
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Danton · Posted: Wed Apr 08, 2009 12:28 am Post subject:

Sorry, I lied. I'm new to this. Please find it in your grace to forgive me oh rejected one...
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Text-Hand of Blood by Bullet for my Valentine
Artwork by mohtzart

Allucard · Posted: Wed Apr 08, 2009 12:34 am Post subject:

post after your done editing...
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Allucard · Posted: Wed Apr 08, 2009 12:49 am Post subject:

approved

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